请英语高手帮我点评一下我的这篇英语四级作文.1有些人认为某些数字会带来好运2也有些人认为数字与运气无关3试说明自己的看法Fromtheancienttimestothepresent,therearesomepeoplethinkthatthen|大学英语四级问答-问答网

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请英语高手帮我点评一下我的这篇英语四级作文.1有些人认为某些数字会带来好运2也有些人认为数字与运气无关3试说明自己的看法Fromtheancienttimestothepresent,therearesomepeoplethinkthatthen

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请英语高手帮我点评一下我的这篇英语四级作文.

1有些人认为某些数字会带来好运

2也有些人认为数字与运气无关

3试说明自己的看法

Fromtheancienttimestothepresent,therearesomepeoplethinkthatthenumberhavemagicpowerandsomegoodnumberswillbringthemgoodluck.ManyChinesebusinessmanlikethenumberof8andtheyholdthatitmeanswealth.Mostimportantly,itwilllettheirbusinessgettingbetterandbetter.Morover,apartofhighschoolstudents,especiallythestudentswhoareabouttoattendtheuniversityentranceexamination.Theyliketochoosetheseatswhichnumberis"8","18","28"."38"or"58",becausetheyconsideredthenumberwillhelpthemtopasstheexamorentertheuniversityeasily.

Toughsomepeoplethinkthatthegoodnumberswillbringgoodlucktothemselves,butasectionofpeopleholdwhatevertheyareluckyornot,itisunconcemedwiththegoodnimberorbadnumber.Theybelieveinifapeoplewhoareworkinghardorstudyinghard,heshouldbecomealuckyman.Onthecentrary,thelazypeoplewhoalwaysstayathomeandhaven'twork,butheoftenhopeagoodnumberof8willbringgoodlucktothemselves,itjustadream!

AsfarasI'mconcerned,Ithinkitisabsurdthatagoodnumbercanhelpustopasstheexamorgetmoremoney.Soeverypeopleshouldworkorstudyhardlyandshouldn'tmakeafetishosagoodnumber,suchas"8","18"or"28".

刘嘉勇回答：

　　简单给你修改了一下：　　Fromtheancienttimestothepresent,therearepeoplethinkingthatnumbersmayhavemagicpowerandsomespecificnumberswillbringthemgoodluck.ManyChinesebusinessmenlikethenumberof8andtheyholdthatitmeansprosperity.Mostimportantly,itwillmaketheirbusinessgettingbetterandbetter.Morover,somehighschoolstudents,especiallythosewhoareabouttoattendtheuniversityentranceexamination,liketochoosetheseatsnumbered8,18,28,38or58,becausetheyconsideredthenumberswillhelpthempasstheexamorenteruniversitieseasily. 　　Althoughsomepeoplethinkthatgoodnumberswillbringgoodluck,othersholdwhatevertheyareluckyornot,totallyunconcernedwiththegoodnumbersorbadnumbers.Theybelieveinifanyoneisworkinghardorstudyinghard,heshouldbecomealuckyman.Onthecontrary,lazypeoplewhoalwaysstayathomeandhaven'tworked,butheoftenhopeagoodnumberof8willbringgoodlucktothemselves,itjustadream! 　　AsfarasI'mconcerned,Ithinkitisabsurdthatagoodnumbercanhelpuspassexamsormakemoremoney.Soeverybodyshouldworkorstudyhardandshouldn'tmakeafussoveragoodnumber,suchas"8","18"or"28".

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