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【英语四级作文,帮我看看哪里错的和要改进的呗(我英语不咋地),嘻嘻……WhatElectivestoChooseThecollegeisthemostimportantstationinourlife!Inthecollege,weneedtouseallkindsofknowledgetoenrichus!So,cho】
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英语四级作文,帮我看看哪里错的和要改进的呗(我英语不咋地),嘻嘻……

WhatElectivestoChoose

Thecollegeisthemostimportantstationinourlife!Inthecollege,weneedtouseallkindsofknowledgetoenrichus!So,choosesomesuitableelectivesforusisanimpantantwaytogetknowledge!

Facetoallkindsofelectives,everyonehavetheirownthinkingandchoice.Somepeoplelikedrawing,theychooseart.Somepeoplelikesports,theychoosePE.Evensomepeopleelsechoosealessonjustthattheywanttorelax!

Inmyopinion,whatelectivestochoosedependonourhabitandwhatyouwanttoknowmore!Wehavetoknowthatwecanimproveusontheonehandbyhabits!Asfarasiamconcerned,ilikecomputersoichoosecomputerscienceandiamreallystudyitwell.

Allinall,wehavepatattentiontowhatkindofelectivestochoose,inordertomakeusbetter!

李允旺回答:
  choosesomesuitableelectivesforusisanimpantantwaytogetknowledge!   头重脚轻了,应该改成It'sanimportantwaytochoosesomesuitableelectivesforustogetknowledge!   Faceto改成facing.   thinking改成thought.   justthattheywanttorelax!把that改成for或者as.   wehavepat改成wehavetopay   makeusbetter改成us后面加一个动词,可以是become等等.   敝人能力有限,希望能帮到你一些.
裴晓芳回答:
  帮助很多了!!不过我想知道thinking改为thought是语法的哪个方面,好补一补,谢谢啦
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