请英语高手帮我点评我的这篇英语四级作文,

1：中国城乡之间的差距似乎有增大的趋势

2：导致这种现象的原因

3：怎样才能缩小城乡之间的差距

BridgingtheGapbetweentheUrbanandRuralAreas

Withthedevelopmentofeconomy,thegapbetwwentheurbanandruralareasseemsincreased.Theurbanareasdevelopingbetterandbetter,theruralareasgetingandgetingworseandworse.

Ithinktherearetworeasonsleadtothisgap.Foronething,theculturalandeducationalworkisnotdevelopwell,somanyruralpeoplehavenotagoodeducationalleveltohelptheirhometowntodevelop.Foranotherthing,manyruralyoungergoestotheurbanareasaredevelopwellandtherearenotmanytalentedstayinginruralareas.

Weshouldtakesomemesurestobridgethegapbetweentheurbanandruralareas.Firstly,theruralgovernmentsshoulddevotemajoreffortstoeducationalwork.Secondly,thecountrygovernmentsshouldofferalargenumberofmoneytohelpthoseruralareastodevelop.Lastly,theruralpeopleshouldstayintheirhometowntohelptheirhometowntodevelop.