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【后天考试了·今天检查作文发现有一小段好像写的有问题~有没有高手帮我改改··我总觉得语法有很大错!麻烦Thepresentsignalisunmistakable:ourteachersandparentsareobsessedwithanideaofmakingtheirchild】
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后天考试了·今天检查作文发现有一小段好像写的有问题~有没有高手帮我改改··我总觉得语法有很大错!麻烦
Thepresentsignalisunmistakable:ourteachersandparentsareobsessedwithanideaofmakingtheirchildrenworkinghardandignoretocommunicatewiththem,whiletheyoftencannotexpressthemselvesclearly.Whatisworse,thebiasandsuspicionbetweentheparentsandchildrenbecomeaserioussocialissue.Youths,whoallliketousethenetworkinglanguage,haveaspeedyexpansionofitsnumber.
刘晓钟回答：
大作拜读,文理通顺,略有瑕疵,大写改过,仅供参考：
Thepresentsignalisunmistakable:ourteachersandparentsareobsessedwithanideaofmakingtheirchildrenWORKhardandignoreTHECOMMUNICATIONwiththem,whiletheyoftenCANNOTexpressthemselvesclearly.Whatisworse,thebiasandsuspicionbetweentheparentsandchildrenbecomeaserioussocialissue.Youths,whoallliketousethenetworkinglanguage,HASaspeedyexpansionofitsnumber.
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