英语四级作文改错ShouldtheuniversitycampusbeopentotouristsThedecisionwheathertheuniversitycampusshouldbeopentotouristshasarousedgreatconcern.Nowadays,thepopularuniversitycampushasbeenthe"hotplace"fortourists,beca|大学英语四级问答-问答网

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英语四级作文改错ShouldtheuniversitycampusbeopentotouristsThedecisionwheathertheuniversitycampusshouldbeopentotouristshasarousedgreatconcern.Nowadays,thepopularuniversitycampushasbeenthe"hotplace"fortourists,beca

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Shouldtheuniversitycampusbeopentotourists

Thedecisionwheathertheuniversitycampusshouldbeopentotouristshasarousedgreatconcern.Nowadays,thepopularuniversitycampushasbeenthe"hotplace"fortourists,becausemanypeoplewanttoseeandknowhowthenewcenturycampushasbeennow.

However,ontheuniversityside,theadministratorsofthecampushasdifferentconsiderationsabouttheyshouldopentheircampustotourists.Foronething,somepeopleinclinedtoshowtheircompustosociety,becausethisseemstoanadvertismentthatcouldguidestudentstomakeagoodchoicetotheuniversity.Foranother,however,somepeoplethinktoomuchtouristsmaybebotherstudentsandteachers.

Weighingupthesetwoarguments,Iprefertheformeropinion.Notonlyopenuniversitycampuscouldenhancethereputation,butalsocouldreceivemanysuggestionsaboutthedevelopmentofschool.

However,theschoolshouldlimittheamountofthetravelersthatwouldn'timpactstudentsandteachersoftheuniversity.

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甘雨回答：

　　我认为你的文章总体还是不错的,但也有一些小问题,具体如下：　　1.“However,ontheuniversityside,theadministratorsofthecampushasdifferentconsiderationsabouttheyshouldopentheircampustotourists.”这句话我认为欠妥,可以改为“However,ontheuniversityside,theadministratorsofthecampushavedifferentideasastowhethertheyshouldopentheircampustotourists.” 　　2.第二段里面的seemsto改为seemsas 　　3.第二段makeagoodchoiceto最好改为动词,因为这种结构没见过,我指的是后面这个介词,除非你将to改为of 　　4.第二段toomuchtourists改为toomanytourists 　　5.第二段最后一句里面的maybe改为may 　　6.我认为第三段应该和第四段合并.而且第四段句意不够明确.我认为应改为：However,schoolauthorityshouldlimittheamountoftouristssothatlifeofstudentsandteachersinschoolwon'tbebotheredtoomuch.

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