初二英语作文修改
Everybodywantstosucceed.Butwhenitcomestothequestionwhatthesuccessis.Manypeoplesay”Idon’tknowhowtosay.”
What’sthesuccess?Inmyopinion,successistheprogressiverealizationofworthyideals,togettheresultsyouwant.Butdifferentpeoplewillofferdifferentanswers.
Thathowtoachieveit?Letusanalyzethepathtotruesuccess.Firstyouneedtohaveadefinitionofsuccess,asmentionedabove.Second,asisknowntoall,nopains,nogains,nothingfornothing.Sowemusttryourbesttodoeverything.Becausevictorywon’tcometomeunlessIgotoit.Andsometimesyouhavetobeyourownhero.So,youshouldlearntobestrong.Thisisthethird.Chaplinoncesaid“Youhavetobelieveinyourself.That'sthesecretofsuccess”Sofourth,youmustbeaconfidentperson.Ifyoufollowtheabovesaidtodo,nothingisimpossible.Neverunderestimateyourpowertochangeyourself.
Atlast,“Standinginthehalloffame.”麻烦各位修改一下这篇作文,语法有错误的请指出,反正你们认为怎样好怎样改
有些啰嗦的地方可以进行删减，老师说要拿去参赛的，最好同一个词不要在文中出现太多，可以用同意思的词代替。这样显得有点重复啰嗦。