请检查这几篇英语短文指出错误和原因
Tuesday,July24th
Todaywassunny.Hotweather!Iwenttoswimningwithmybestfriends.Inthepool,thereweremanypeopel.Sokindofcrowded.Butwehadgoodtime.Thenwetoeatalotofthings.Theywereverydelicious.Ilikedtoeattheice-cream.Iatetow.Afterdelicious.Ilikedtoeattheice-cream.Iatetow.Afterdelicious.Ilikedtoeattheice-cream.Iatetow.Afterdelicious.Ilikedtoeattheice-cream.Iatetow.After
Tuesday,July31st
Todaywasthesummerofninedays.Thesedays
playingveryhappy.Today,Ihadtobeworkedhard.
6:00Igotup,eatabread,abowlofmilk.Iwrotea
morningofthehomework.Iwashungry.Iateabowl
ofnoodlestheywereawful.IwatchedTV,then
workedhard.Frommymother,Shecookeddinner
forme.Today,veryhappyday!
Tuesday,July10th
Greatweather!itwassunnyandhotallday.
Todaywasthefirstdayofoursummervacation.
Allofuswereveryhappy.Why?Becausewehave
towmonthstodothingswelovetodo.Thismade
mefeelveryhappy.But,Ihadtodomanyhomework.
Theywerekindofdifficultandtoomany.Ihoped
Ihaveagoodsummervacation.
Tuesday,July17th
TodayitrainedsoIwenttothesupermarke.
Itwastoocrowdedsoididn'treallyenjoyit.Thenigothomeat
teno'clockThenIcleanedmyroom.
Thatmademefeelverytired.Afterthat.Ididmy
homework.Itwaskindofdifficult.Andintheafter-
noon,Iplayedpingpongwithmyfriends.Itwasvery
exciting.Ilikedtoplaypingpongverymuch.
另外还想问个问题英语写日记时什么时候用一般式而不用过去式
如看到的什么用一般式
虽然有点麻烦请大家仔细点!